A Day At the BeachA day at the beach,
can be a thunderstorm.
Imagine a small wave in the ocean,
the wind pushing it as it grows and grows.
finally it approaches the sand;
crashing, thundering, against the shore.
Imagine the water splashing off of
this wave.
the salty spray hits your face,
each water droplet;
like a drop of rain.
Imagine the sun beams,
reflecting on the water,
lines of electric light
here and there;
Looks like lightening.
Imagine a day at the beach,
and imagine a thunderstorm,
imagine how similar,
the two of them are.
And like I said before,
A day at the beach,
can be a thunderstorm.
Great imagery. When you wrote "the salty spray hits your face, each water droplet;" it made me feel like i was there, at the beach.
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this poem reminds me of being at the beach
ReplyDeleteI love how you compared nature to nature, instead of an animal or people to nature. It makes it really unique from the other poems like this that I have read =)
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the metaphors that you use in this poem! good job!
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